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Mrs. Hopeful - Chapter 4 by ~IMustBeAlive:iconIMustBeAlive:



I doubt that he could look at me the way he looks at her
And I fall apart from every word that's leaving me unsure

She's got him by the chest
And if she wants, his feet will never touch the ground

I don't know what to do
I don't know what to do...

He whispers in the sweetest way I wish I didn't hear
And smiles when she kisses deep and never stops for air

She's got him by the chest
And if she wants, he'll fall the lovers fall

I don't know what to do
I don't know what to do...


I thought this would be easy...silly girl. I break trust for a living, not hearts. If someones going to cry, it's going to be over me, not some other thing, not some other woman. Although it is amusing to watch how stupid that man is around her.

And am I to wreck that?

It's surprising I even struggle with whether to care or not, and wish this could be easier because my eyes miss being dry. I'm sure I'll look back on this occasion with risibility, and a sense of humor at how absurd I was to set aside my intent for any amount of time at all.  I suppose love can make even outsides and innocent bystanders guilty of wanting it to last. It tricks us into believing maybe this time it's for real, maybe this time it will last forever, and humanity will not be complete shit after all.

I'm not so easy to convince or be mislead anymore...and yet I see it in his eyes, and how he acts when she laughs or pouts her lips.

And am I to break that?

Am I to be the one Sir Tanly Safe hates for tomorrow and a day?

Furthermore, how would I tell Mr. Sick I was unable to complete my work?

Be it as it may, she will be the end of me.

Should I let him keep his lovely girl forever in romance
Or let my little lies come out and ruin his only chance

I've got him by the chest
And If I want, his feet will never leave the ground

I don't know what to do
I don't know what to do...

Be it as it may, Ms. Conception will be the end of me.
©2008-2009 ~IMustBeAlive
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Whoa dude, these are getting so awesome, involved and deep....just when I think you've gotten really deep with these and made me think as much about it as I can, I go through and read a second time and I think about even more....great job!

XOXOX

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~*~Bridget Michelle~*~
:damphyr: "All the love you put out will return to you."
hopefully its the kind of thing people can read more then once when its all done.
yeah definitely well it just makes you think..and then you read it through again...and it makes you think about more stuff. Stimulating.

XOXOX

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~*~Bridget Michelle~*~
:damphyr: "All the love you put out will return to you."
oh wow. jealousy is quite the stinging emotion. i love the way you write it. keep it coming :D

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:pacman:
thats the way I like to write.

I hope that someday if I ever finish the book people will like it, because rather then filling space with boring description of everything, its just all thought and philosophy.
glad you like it I wish I could write faster haha.

But its draining sometimes to make everything meaningful instead of just boring like most books.
I've got him by the chest
And If I want, his feet will never leave the ground is my fav part

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[[When I die the hate in my eyes will live on]]
I like to switch things around with words.

It's fun if you catch it.
no pressure. i'll only hate you forever and establish a militant army of spamming commenters to force you along your way if you can't meet your quota.

seriously o.o

haha. i joke i joke.

but really. whenever you produce it, i will most definitely be reading it. i'm quite taken by the fact that your words feel so personal, very real. and i'm quite impressed at your ability to write such a believable female character. y'know, considering you have a penis and all (i'm assuming). yoo haff gud brainz. but yes, most definitely not boring, like most books. :)

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